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When she was in high school, she wrote with colors.
She wrote with the shades of a heart, and the shades of the sky. She wrote with the subtle differences in each color of green on each blade of grass. She wrote with the color of light flowing out of her fingers and the colors of orange in fall tumbling out of her mouth and dancing across the paper like leaves dancing across the sky.
She wrote with the pinks and purples of sunset and every color of dawn. She wrote with the tones of earth that you could scoop up in your hands and let drip through your fingers. She wrote with the pastel colors of twilight and the bright hues of a coral reef on the coast of some foreign country she would never get the chance to see.
She wrote with a prism hanging above her paper so she could see the colors of the world, and she wrote with rainbows seeping out of her pores and collecting themselves on paper to form letters, words, and sentences.
But now, she writes in monotone.
She writes in black and white and a grayscale so limited you can't tell the difference between a comma and an apostrophe, and letters in words fade together and fade away until all you can see is the white of the paper behind them.
She writes like a still, somber statue, with pen in hand, but to slow and too weathered to move it. Her once bright words are like smoke from a cigar against a white backdrop in a black room, barely visible and barely there for a instant.
Because smoke fades away, and ink will always dry out, and inspiration left her like the way snow leaves a cloud - beautiful, but cold.
She wrote with the shades of a heart, and the shades of the sky. She wrote with the subtle differences in each color of green on each blade of grass. She wrote with the color of light flowing out of her fingers and the colors of orange in fall tumbling out of her mouth and dancing across the paper like leaves dancing across the sky.
She wrote with the pinks and purples of sunset and every color of dawn. She wrote with the tones of earth that you could scoop up in your hands and let drip through your fingers. She wrote with the pastel colors of twilight and the bright hues of a coral reef on the coast of some foreign country she would never get the chance to see.
She wrote with a prism hanging above her paper so she could see the colors of the world, and she wrote with rainbows seeping out of her pores and collecting themselves on paper to form letters, words, and sentences.
But now, she writes in monotone.
She writes in black and white and a grayscale so limited you can't tell the difference between a comma and an apostrophe, and letters in words fade together and fade away until all you can see is the white of the paper behind them.
She writes like a still, somber statue, with pen in hand, but to slow and too weathered to move it. Her once bright words are like smoke from a cigar against a white backdrop in a black room, barely visible and barely there for a instant.
Because smoke fades away, and ink will always dry out, and inspiration left her like the way snow leaves a cloud - beautiful, but cold.
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I'm Gone.
Good luck was never a choice,
Especially when you've absolutely nobody that could hear your inner sad voice.
It's just that I'm fed up,
That I can't even find the cup,
To be able to see it half empty or half full,
Or to catch one single dream that I can't pull.
I've been waiting for so, so long,
Till I figured out lately, I already lost my theme song.
Oh, not again. It's weirdly humiliating.
It's so sad, knowing I am no more waiting.
But, luckily, I've been used to dealing with humiliation,
However was or is the situation.
Yes, this is really happening,
It's crazy, but it's also happening.
Actually, I no more belong to you,
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Recipe for Bad Poetry
How to Write Bad Poetry:
Start with: SCISSORS
Scissors are very good cutting your prose
into pieces (as well as fending off mobs of real poets).
It works better if you start with
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steel heart.
i. he has a heart made of steel.
ii. he meets a six foot tall, awkward and lanky boy in a quaint little coffee shop, and the wires inside his steel heart twitch. large doe eyes stare straight into his shell and he thinks his brain has begun to malfunction. he finds himself asking the name of the boy, and his steel heart begins to hum maxmaxmax.
iii. hands run softly through his hair and he's pretty sure the heat in his chest cavity isn't a good thing. he records the touch of max's fingers in his hair and stores it as a file worth a few hearty gigabytes. he begins to save everything that max does, and replays them over and over again when he
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Feedback request!! Does the one line about coral reefs and the ending fit in okay? I wasn't sure if i should keep it or not and does it seem too much like everything else out there about this subject? I tried to put my own twist on it, but it was sorta a fail
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-Is finally getting around to reading some writing and poetry lately after an insanely busy month-
Your mastery of imagery always astounds me. You're able to paint such vivid pictures with only a few words. Gorgeous. I love the contrast between the beginning and the end. The ending was beautiful - it gave me chills. There was something so melancholy about it, so sad, and I could relate to that feeling of dried up inspiration. I love how you related losing one's inspiration to the way snow leaves a cloud - "beautiful, but cold." Not a lot of people would think of it that way, but it works. The girl in the story used her inspiration to create these beautiful works of literature, but as time passes, eventually the inspiration dries up and leaves her cold, uninspired.
There is one tiny detail that popped out to me, and although it's not necessary to appreciate what the story's about, it's something to consider - In the beginning you mention the girl was a freshmen, and then it just jumped into "But now, she writes in monotone." How far ahead is "now"? A year? A decade? Was this beautiful bit of inspiration fleeting? Or was it something that was worn away with time? Actually, I'm not even sure the "When she was a freshman in high school" is needed - just "She used to write with colors" - or it may just need to be rewritten to be less specific. I dunno, it just seems wordy and throws off the transition from the first part to the second for me. Could be my own problem, though.
Either way, it's lovely. You know I admire your work. Keep at it, and Happy New Years.
Your mastery of imagery always astounds me. You're able to paint such vivid pictures with only a few words. Gorgeous. I love the contrast between the beginning and the end. The ending was beautiful - it gave me chills. There was something so melancholy about it, so sad, and I could relate to that feeling of dried up inspiration. I love how you related losing one's inspiration to the way snow leaves a cloud - "beautiful, but cold." Not a lot of people would think of it that way, but it works. The girl in the story used her inspiration to create these beautiful works of literature, but as time passes, eventually the inspiration dries up and leaves her cold, uninspired.
There is one tiny detail that popped out to me, and although it's not necessary to appreciate what the story's about, it's something to consider - In the beginning you mention the girl was a freshmen, and then it just jumped into "But now, she writes in monotone." How far ahead is "now"? A year? A decade? Was this beautiful bit of inspiration fleeting? Or was it something that was worn away with time? Actually, I'm not even sure the "When she was a freshman in high school" is needed - just "She used to write with colors" - or it may just need to be rewritten to be less specific. I dunno, it just seems wordy and throws off the transition from the first part to the second for me. Could be my own problem, though.
Either way, it's lovely. You know I admire your work. Keep at it, and Happy New Years.